举一个例子：Grammatical Range and Accuracy这一项若想达到6分，除了保证全文的语法错误数量低于10个，必须掌握的句型有简单句、并列句和复合句。如果一名学生不能正确使用定语从句，那么他需要做的是先针对性地学习定语从句的相关用法，再通过专项训练，如定语从句汉译英的句子翻译练习来改善，而不是埋头做题。
As major cities around the world are growing fast and many problems occur. 随着城市的快速发展，年轻人面临着许多的问题，又该如何解决这些问题?
With the relentless march of urbanization in many countries，a string of problems related to young adults who are resident in metropolises should not be ignored. In this essay, the prominent problems and some solutions will be expounded.
Joblessness is widely regarded as one of the primary issues. Nowadays, an increasing number of young people migrate to megacities for convenient life and abundant public resources. However, fierce job competition could also be fueled by this migration and many young people may be afflicted with unemployment. For example, those who fail to possess advanced skills and higher academic qualifications may find it hard to compete in the job market. As there are sometimes hundreds of applicants for one position in a company, young people lacking experience are more likely to be eliminated, resulting in the rising unemployment rate in super-sized cities. What is more, city dwellers’ deteriorating quality of life is attributable to the rapid development of metropolitan cities. Young adults, especially university graduates, lead a hectic life but earn meager wages, which means that under the extremely high cost of living and the shortage of disposable income, houses become unaffordable and unthinkable for them. As a result, the low living satisfaction brings about mental diseases, such as anxiety and depression.
To mitigate the problems, some measures should be taken. Firstly, information about advanced skills should be available to the youth either from the Internet or universities. Meanwhile, young people need to update knowledge so as to improve their employability. Secondly, it is imperative that the government should provide financial incentives for them. For instance, housing and employment subsidies can release young people’s huge economic pressure, which can help them lead a better life.
In conclusion, in order to survive and thrive in metropolises, young people should be well equipped to grapple with above mentioned problems and support from the government could also alter the status quo.
migrate to megacities 移居大城市
be fueled by 被，，激化
be afflicted with 受….折磨
academic qualifications 学历
is attributable to 归因于
lead a hectic life 过着忙碌的生活
earn meager wages 挣微薄的工资
disposable income 可支配收入
unaffordable and unthinkable 不能负担和不能想象
be available to 对….可获得
improve employability 提高就业能力
financial incentives 财政激励
survive and thrive 生存和发展
be well equipped 准备充分
grapple with 努力克服
alter the status quo 改变现状
With the relentless march of urbanization 随着城市化进程的不断推进
a string of problems related to…should not be ignored 与….有关的一系列问题不应被忽视
fail to possess…. may find it hard to…. 不能掌握….会发现很难…
To mitigate the problems, some measures should be taken. 为了缓解问题，应该采取一些措施
it is imperative that…..should….. 当务之急是…..
雅思写作大作文满分范文：保护野生动物(wild animals protection)
Some people argue that it is pointless to spend money on the protection of wild animals because we humans have no need for them. I completely disagree with this point of view.
In my opinion, it is absurd to argue that wild animals have no place in the 21st century. I do not believe that planet Earth exists only for the benefit of humans, and there is nothing special about this particular century that means that we suddenly have the right to allow or encourage the extinction of any species. Furthermore, there is no compelling reason why we should let animals die out. We do not need to exploit or destroy every last square metre of land in order to feed or accommodate the world’s population. There is plenty of room for us to exist side by side with wild animals, and this should be our aim.
I also disagree with the idea that protecting animals is a waste of resources. It is usually the protection of natural habitats that ensures the survival of wild animals, and most scientists agree that these habitats are also crucial for human survival. For example, rainforests produce oxygen, absorb carbon dioxide and stabilise the Earth’s climate. If we destroyed these areas, the costs of managing the resulting changes to our planet would far outweigh the costs of conservation. By protecting wild animals and their habitats, we maintain the natural balance of all life on Earth.
In conclusion, we have no right to decide whether or not wild animals should exist, and I believe that we should do everything we can to protect them.(269 words, band 9)
相关雅思写作观点集： Animal rights
1.Arguments for Animal testing 动物实验论点
Animals are used in important scientific research
It is necessary to do medical tests on new drugs
Animal testing helps to advance medical and scientific knowledge
Many important medical discoveries involved experimentation on animals
Researchers aim to minimize the suffering that animals experience
Testing for the cosmetics industry is now banned in many countrie
2.Arguments against Animal Testing 反对动物实验
The benefits of research using animals do not justify the suffering caused
There are alternative methods of research
The lives of animals should be respected
Humans have no moral right to do experiments on animals
3.Positives of Zoos 动物园的积极作用
Zoos paly an important role in wildlife conservation
They can help to protect endangered species
Zoos allow scientists to study animals and their behavior
Zoos are educational, interesting and fun
Children, in particular, enjoy learning about animals
Zoos provide job opportunities.
4.Negatives of Zoos 动物园的消极作用
Zoo animals are kept in artificial environments
They are kept in cages or have limited space
Zoo animals rely on humans
They lose the freedom to hunt for food
They best way to save endangered species is by protecting natural habitats.
Some people believe that zoos are unethical
Zoos exhibits animals with the aim of making money
We have no right to use animals for entertainment and profit.
题目是Online shopping is now replacing shopping in store. Do you think it is positive or negative development?由于互联网的发展，现在很多人都不去商店而选择在网上购物。那么，这个趋势是好还是坏呢?详情请看小站原创雅思大作文高分范文及思路详解。
paragraph 1 :结合时代背景引入话题且表明自己的观点。
paragraph 2: 论述网络购物的优点。(分为买家和卖家两个层面)
paragraph 3: 论述网络购物的缺点。(分为买家和实体商家两个层面)
paragraph 4: 总结上文论点，强调自己的观点以及如何避免缺点。
With the advent of internet, people’s way of shopping has been dramatically changed. Online shopping is thriving and taking the place of shopping in physical shops. Undeniably, both consumers and sellers can benefit from this tendency though several drawbacks can not be underestimated.
From the perspective of vendors, the budget for running business is diminished considerably for the reason that the rent for a shop online is quite cheaper and some are even free of charge; besides, there is no need for them to pay for utility bills. The most advantageous is that their commodities can be introduced to a wider range of people. As long as sellers launch new products, consumers no matter at home or abroad are able to search it by searching engines within seconds. In this case, they are likely to gain huge profits from the high sales of goods. As for buyers, it is achievable to purchase whatever they need without going out. Unlike the past, the only thing they need do is to pick out items and click the button for payment. Furthermore, they may easily compare the price and features of products, as well as find bargains, buying the ideal goods with less cost.
Conversely, there also exist some defects about this shopping pattern. To commence with, it may lead to irrational or excessive consumption. Shopping can be done anywhere at daytime or night, with diverse commodities available from the whole world. Under such circumstance, it is hard for consumers to resist the temptation and easier to buy something failing to meet their real demands. What’s worse, owners of physical stores are facing bankrupt. Statistics show that there were 22 shopping centers closed in Shanghai in the first half year of 2016. The consequent unemployment aggravates the burden on government.
In conclusion, as far as I am concerned the boom of online transaction is unstoppable and irreversible and it boosts the prosperity of national economy. In an attempt to avoid unnecessary consumption, shoppers had better think twice before making decisions of purchase. (339 words)